我的一个学生的英语小作文

英语一对一辅导

My   rabbit

One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. I’m very happy.

From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. they have two little ears, red eyes,

with white and fat boby. they’re marvellous.

Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldn’t find them.

I asked my mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didn’t know.

At last, I found them in the grass. they were very dirty. I was angry,

but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again.

I love my little rabbits, and they love me. they are my good friends forever.  




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王者风范

The hare can now kill have you had dinner yet?

I want to eat the rabbit chafing dish

英语一对一辅导

王者风范 发表于 2011-11-15 08:56
The hare can now kill have you had dinner yet?

I want to eat the rabbit chafing dish

I pray you for mercy！

jinzheng

老师我想请问一下 USA和USB相差在那里。。。

王者风范

英语一对一辅导 发表于 2011-11-15 09:02
I pray you for mercy！

The rabbit is not the national animal protection should be able to eat{:soso_e144:}

英语一对一辅导

jinzheng 发表于 2011-11-15 09:02
老师我想请问一下 USA和USB相差在那里。。。

脑筋急转弯啊，呵呵

一个是a,一个是b嘛

英语一对一辅导

王者风范 发表于 2011-11-15 09:06
The rabbit is not the national animal protection should be able to eat

孩子好不容易写成一篇作文，还望各位能指正作文中的不足

甭只惦记吃

王者风范

呵呵，是啊，都是玩笑而已。这孩子不错，都是你教导有方啊

英语一对一辅导

王者风范 发表于 2011-11-15 09:10
呵呵，是啊，都是玩笑而已。这孩子不错，都是你教导有方啊

多谢夸奖

孩子语感很好

进步很快！

王者风范

英语一对一辅导 发表于 2011-11-15 09:13
多谢夸奖

孩子语感很好

呵呵，你别谦虚啦